Its a point of view of expecting psychedelic listener :
Don't like the synth, too easy, doesnt fit with such original sounds at begining (this pitch modulation is crazy !)
Nice kick, seems empty after 5:00 but its interesting. More reverb would be fun ... ?
But more than all, drum beat and sounds are too easy and "normal" for me. Snare doesn't fit so much.
Too large introduction, expecting is good but too much is boring.
Good luck