Ashmanakash 3 Report post Posted January 14, 2015 Hi everybody ! I introduce myself first, I'm Ashmanakash, a french music producer. I say I'm a producer, the reality is that I started making electronic music one year ago. The link I'm posting here is the first tune I've ever finished, and of course I'm looking for feedbacks, advices on how to progress. It's a kind of psybient track, named Labyrinth. I'm aware that there are still some equalization mistakes to correct and it needs to be masterized. Thanks for listening, and thanks for any helpfull comment you could do ! Peace https://soundcloud.com/ashmanakash/labyrinth-1 1 Gagarin Project reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gagarin Project 400 Report post Posted January 16, 2015 thank you for sharing! i changed your link from link to text mode, so now it is visible as audip player. Also i suggest you to edit the post in "full editor" mode to add the "style" tags, as i believe it might bring more attention to your demo track. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Spinnet (One Arc Degree) 89 Report post Posted January 18, 2015 Nice ideas here, eastern-flavored psydub What I would love to hear is more prominent dub elements (eg. a deeper sub bassline, semi-random dub delays on the snare, stuff like that). Also, I believe you could make a tighter edit by shortening the outro and the intro. Keep it up 1 Ashmanakash reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Prizm Prime 5 Report post Posted January 18, 2015 If this is your first finished track and you have only been producing for one year, then CONGRATULATIONS TO YOU, mate! Very nice track! Personally for my taste I think your snare might have a bit too much hi-frequency on it, and i would like to hear it drop out sometimes so the melodics would stand out more during the first part. This is of course just personal preference. KEEP IT UP!! 2 Ashmanakash and Gagarin Project reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ashmanakash 3 Report post Posted January 18, 2015 Thanks to all of you for your advices, and I will work again on that track to try these modifications you write me about Thanks for the encouragement ! 1 Gagarin Project reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
