A sharp left turn for me... would love some critique!

[uuce 0]

New kid here. Rediscovered this genre later in life (after getting married and having kids). Spent much of my younger days listening to Ott, Sphongle, etc. Always felt drawn to it but never had the stones to give it a go on my own. In any case, here's my first attempt. It's a nod to Ott and ""One Day I Wish To Have This Kind Of Time". 
All original except for the landscape chirpings and speech parts. 

A bit nervous to share, but, nothing ventured nothing gained. I hope it makes you tap your foot a bit. 

 

 

 

[Gagarin Project 400]

welcome

never to late to pursue music quest

some more steps to reach OTT, but i like your ideas and instrumentation !

continue please